by Dennis Mar 9, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
love is
Soft breath on my face yours only in sleep |
by Rachel RTVW
Your flow was right on in this one. Very sweet and though simply worded, you have avoided really forcing the rhymes. You did a great job on this one! I hope your honey likes it! |
by Dark Secrets
Great poem!! 5/5 |
by Dark Secrets
Great poem!! 5/5 |
by Fake Facade
Wow, great poem. |
by Jackie
One thing's for sure, you are definitely a romantic. Your poems of love always leave me smiling. Thanks for another beautiful job! 5/5 |