This one is not bad but I definatley liked your other 2 better to be honest with you. Hopefully you don't think I'm being rude it's just my opinion and well I wouldn't expect anything less from anyone who comments my poetry but honesty.

But keep on writing.

This is good very short but i think that conveys the point more. very well written 5/5 xxx

Great poem i have to read ur other ones still

Very beautifully written...but try to find more wide ideas...(actually, i'm also trying that for my poems since I have writer's block)...

but still,it's a good poem...