Comments : I remember the 1st time...

  • 16 years ago

    by iloveyourexistence

    Aww, i love this! ,great work !:D you are very good at writing ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by enigmatic_prey

    This is really good....it is really touching...

    perfect score for you...

    ^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by XxBrokenInsidexX

    Thats a good peom!
    Im not a big fan on the repititon deal though,But this poem was really good

  • 16 years ago

    by Amber

    Awww, its like your speaking for every person that this has happened to. It was emotional and got me thinking about my past relationhip and the one i'm in.
    Good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Daisy Wells

    Brilliant poem hun i could feel the emotion in every line. in answer to your question you are very talented keep up the good work 5/5xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Krista

    =) reaaly good

  • 16 years ago

    by xbxdrfntx

    Hey ya this poem iz absolutely great!! i love it... great, awesome work!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by katie

    Its a good poem
    but not something i would read all the time
    but it does resemble everyone who has been in that possition
    very nice
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