When we go

by halie   Mar 9, 2008


Year by year
month by month
week by week
day by day
hour by hour
minute by minute
second by second
our life counts down
weather we like it or not
we all will go..... eventually
as a Innocent baby
as a toddler that has no clue
as a young child that's fault is not theirs
as a stupid teenager that just did something stupid
as a mid-aged adult that smoked a little too much
or as a gracefully old person that was a hundred and four
we will all go eventually
its not up to us though
so live life to the fullest and never regret
and go for what you want

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    Its so true everything you have said...good poem....live life to the full

  • 16 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    Its so true everything you have said...good poem....live life to the full

  • 16 years ago

    by Gizmo

    Thats very true, death comes when we least expect it, and we never saw it coming

  • 16 years ago

    by MusoXDanielle

    So so true!

    Great poem!

    5/5
    Danielle
    XX

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