" take my soul cause i dont want it anymore, take my love cause i dont want it anymore. " i loved this part, tell thought of and nicely penned.. This i can relate to in some way.. Nice job keep it up

" take my soul cause i dont want it anymore, take my love cause i dont want it anymore. " i loved this part, tell thought of and nicely penned.. This i can relate to in some way.. Nice job keep it up