Hiya,
reading this poem is like reading some of my work. Did it almost write itself? i love it when the words just flow.

5/5 Well done
Michael
p.s this 'guy' sounds like the kind you should keep.

Its good.
It flowed well and the imagery was clear.

"He's been my friend
Through the good and the bad
He's helped me a lot
A proper good lad"

^^My favourite stanza.

Keep up the good work 5/5

He's always been there
Whatever I need
We're THERE for each other
That's what we agreed ..

I think you meant to say there?.. instead of they?

anyway this poem is really cute and really sweet.. It sounds like such a great friendship between you two and you can really get that feeling just by reading this poem.

Very nice job. I really enjoyed reading it. Keep it up! =)

Ii can totaly relate to this. it was realyl good. you did a really good job.

and all ii can tell you is to hold onto that guy
because ii went through the exact same thing. and he was in love with me and ii never gave him a chance untill 8 months ago and now ii dont think that i've ever been so happy in my life!!!

5/5 good work gurl

5/5 and this guy seems really sweet like the guy you should hold onto and rap your self around. once u got him dont let go. cause it hurts when u loose someone like him. trust me....... i know :'(