Comments : The Razorblade

  • 16 years ago

    by MissAlyssaGraff

    I like this poem because it makes me understand how people feel when they want to cut themselves. Thank you for opening my eyes!

    5/5!
    PLEASE DO NOT CUT THOUGH! :) please.

    -Alyssa

  • 16 years ago

    by Grace

    I love this poem ;p

  • 16 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    Okay, at first I thought that this was going to be a really good poem because the first stanza was organized and rhymed and flowed well.Yet, as I read on the vocabulary became poor and the organization fell away.It was like you just suddenly got writer's block and it all melted away.Try using vast words and organize your stanzas better.It would be a great poem then.

    -Amber