The View Out

by sibyllene   Mar 10, 2008


Brambles crossed and brushed the
trees
withhold amorous sky
its heartache seeping coldly
weeping
watching blessed birds go by

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cory Mastrandrea

    It is very good picture of you. This reminds me of a hiaku, despite not being one. It is about nature, observing the universe. Very zen.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Short, and lovely. [5.5]

  • 16 years ago

    by Natalie

    Nicely done. Loved the word usuage.