Comments : My Very Best Friend

  • 16 years ago

    by Cody Jo as you no

    I I I I I I I I I I I I I SOOOOO LOVVVVEEEE This AND AND AND AND THATS HOWWWW I I I I I I I WAS TILLLLLLL I I I I I I FOUND MYYYY BESSTTTEST FRIEND IN THE WHOLE WIDDDEEEEE WORRRLDDDDDD

  • 15 years ago

    by Aish

    Very sweet.
    a personal expressive write-she sounds amazing. the fact the last line breaks the rhyming pattern of the rest of the poem has a nice effect.

    another 5/5

    aish
    xx