Putting Order Into

by sibyllene   Mar 10, 2008


Twilight folds its apron, and
tucks away patches of sun
(they clink like foil and gold coins)
into silken pockets of night.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    Short but very impacting to the mind.

    I had to read it 3 times ... because I loved it that much.
    Excellent imagery you've painted with just 22 words.
    Luanne

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    This is fabulously charming. The way you descibe the sun setting below the horizon. Gold foil coins tucked into silken pockets of the night. *Clapping*

    Well done 5/5

    Michael