This was a very interesting poem. Your descriptions were really vivid. The flow wasn't that great, and I think you could have added a bit more to the story. Explained it a bit more.

"I then hear now the winds howl"
^^"now" I think should be "how".

Willed as lightening
Willed as the wind
Willed as the rain
Willed as a hurricane
^^I really liked the repetion in those lines. It adds to the poem.

Great job!

Keep writing!
Cayce

I agree with Cayce... those 4 lines were amazing! The ending could've been better, but the concept was good. And the flow was good as well :P Nice write!