I Remember

by MissMeg   Mar 10, 2008


I remember like it was yesterday.
When it was just me and you.
All the memories we shared.
All the things we used to do.

I remember like it was a minute ago;
The pressure of your lips against mine.
You told me you were mine forever.
And you would love me until the end of time.

I remember like it was a moment ago.
The way I felt when you walked away.
My life changed in that one instant.
And it has never been the same.

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  • 16 years ago

    by withlove

    I really like this
    it really had a nice effect the way you went from yesterday to a minute to a moment
    and u had such strong expression through so few words
    great job
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ashlee

    I liked this one!!!
    it was intense

  • 16 years ago

    by emiley

    Wow girl thats a greatttt! poem!!! your like BAM! lol. lol.

  • 16 years ago

    by Blue

    Yeah, it's kinda sad, that's really the only poems i can create tho, so yeh, good work i like!