It's A Dream

by Brittany C   Mar 10, 2008


Angel eyes of the most beautiful blue
look at me as I lay next to you.
Looking at me up and down,
full of hunger and the deepest desires.

I can see your love for me
in those amazing blue eyes.
Feeling your powerful love for me
in the way you hold me so close.

The sound of your heartbeat
lulls me to sleep,
as I lay in your arms
warm and safe.

But these only dreams
until you are home.
Until then my heart
cries out for you.

Can you here it baby?

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  • 16 years ago

    by firexdancer

    This was also very sweet, but again, the flow was quite bad. In the last line I also believe that you meant to say "hear" instead of "here".
    Also, one thing that sort of turned me off on this poem was that you use the same words alot, I know I do this sometime too, but it's better to use different words for the same thing in a poem, or else it can get sorta boring for the reader.
    3/5
    ~gabriella

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Waw great i love the way you start it,so nice 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    OMG, this is such a beautiful poem. It has so much feeling in it, with those simple words you wrote. I can totally relate to it since I feel like this towards my babe. Really good poem. I absolutely loved it. Great job! 5/5

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    Nice romantic poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Kitten

    Your poetry is awsomely written i dont usually like love poems but this really touched me

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