OMG Girl You Went Deep And It Made Me Cry NOING THAT I DID THE SAME THING TO THE BOY IM GOIN out with and im so glad he took me back, will u read my new poem its my newest one and its about my boyfriend and my bffl lol ill tell u what it is called in a message ok

Awwww
I'm so sorrrry.
This is def emotional.

Thats really good i felt like crying

Wow!! man i hope u find someone who makes u happy cuz from your poetry i can tell ur the type of person who is hard to make love but whenu do love u love hard....n u need someone to love u back

Man that was really deep and intagraded, I gotta say. I really like it.

Thats was great! i loved how u took what ur going through put in a story but yet make it a poem. It takes a very good poet do something like that. as for ur love life- dont look for love let it find u. sometimes u have to let some1 go but once u do theres something(someone) who can replace it, not completely but it will.5/5 always
Kate~

Oooh love this one

I love this poem it reminds me of the exsact same mistake i made i love the way u incorperatd wat happened to u it is amazing

What a sad write. I remember what it felt like to be young and heartbroken. What is meant to be will be. This poem tells an emotional story. Keep your chin up!

Very, very, very, lovely. I can relate to this and it took me 35 years to find him again. But he found me and now he is in love with two women. How can that be but true love never dies. XXXX
Well done.

Very sad, great poem though....

Wow...really long but well worth it lol very good poem.

Great poem i liked it

Wow...it was long, but i loved it. it was very good, and it was deep.
Amazing job.
5/5

But he had found someone new and dear
someone that finally made him feel completed
like he had never felt before in his life, when she
was by his side, by no one could he be defeated
^^^this twist in the story took me by surprise...unil I read it, I thought he would take you back again! Sometimes we think we know what the other feels and thinks about us, Tabi...but we can be wrong. The worst pain you feel is when you find out you were wrong and the damage is beyond repair.
You wrote it all down and I hope many young girls will read it and learn the lesson that is in this verse:)

hugs,

5/5 Ingrid