by Megha May 21, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
There's something in those eyes of yours, |
by Amit
~ lovely rhyme megha, very sweet! |
The poem is beautiful... But second to last line is obiously forced.. Try to change that... IT is spoiling the beauty of the whole poem.... Remeber all poems eed not rhyme... After you read this...delete my comment. |