If I...

by lonelydreamer   Mar 10, 2008


If I died tonight
would you care
If I died tonight
would you cry

What if i drove a knife through my heart
would you notice

What if i hung myself
would you leave me there

What if i drowned myself
would you try to bring me back to life

What if i jumped off a building
would you try to catch me

What if i died in my sleep
would you lay by my side

What if i put a gun to my forehead
would you stop me

If I died tonight
would you care
If I died tonight
would you cry

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  • 13 years ago

    by MissMana

    Really awesome...i can relate..i think most people can...which is good...its always good to know your not the only one...but please lets not try any of things you have listed..lol...keep your head up

    S.M.I.L.E

  • 14 years ago

    by ChallengexEverything

    This is a very relatable poem, i have wondered the same thing.

    verryyy nice keep up the good work :)
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Aubrey

    I love how you repeated the first stanza again as the last stanza. It's like you started your point, stated what you need to, then ended with something to have to think about .
    good job.

  • 15 years ago

    by silvertung69

    I have often through my travels wounderd thes same things. I have felt the grips of that goast. thanx

  • 16 years ago

    by xXxPeRc0C3txXx

    Yes

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