Oh my gosg, Nelle! You made me cry! I seriously have tears rolling down my face. This was so freaking sad, yet so sweet. I have someone I think about when I read this. I guess that's why I'm crying, because it made me think of them. This was just a heart-breakingly sweet poem. I have nothing bad at all to say about it.

Keep writing!
Cayce

I love this poem. It's written so beautifully. It reminds me of a few poems that I've read and somethings that have been going on in my life. Great job. 5/5

Realy i can feel you,you write it in beautiful way makes me keep read every word to the end.

Wow, i dont know wether to be amazed by the poem, or saddened