Falling Off of Cliffs is Just as Dangerous as Falling INTO Love

by Curing the Comon Cliche   Mar 10, 2008


My hands feel cold
I miss that hug
A place of warmth
Where I feel snug

My ears hear you
Say you wish to fall in love
But falling is painful
Enjoy the view from above

My feet are standing
So close to the edge
Avoiding many slips
It's harder not to fall
When a smile curls on your lips

My hands feel warmer
My ears hear my heart pound
My feet have stumbled
I fall off solid ground

I fall and I fall
Trying to spread fake wings
But I'm feeling the rush
That this falling brings

English teachers should be proud
For this metaphor I use
I'm not falling off a cliff
I'm falling, in love, with you

*to Breanne*

Yes gabby, u can jump for joy now, just don't break the mirror.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Disaster

    English teachers should be proud
    For this metaphor I use
    I'm not falling off a cliff
    I'm falling, in love, with you

    Like most of your other poems, the last stanza is my favorite. I dont know if i ever told you this, but this is one poem that i never expected. Definately one of your best

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    AWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT IS SOOOOO ADORABLE!!!!!!!!! once again my favorite part was the ending! but the whole thing was just so...AWWWWW!!!!!! it's sooooo CUTE! i luv it sooo much!
    xoxo
    ~!me!~

    254657625642543564254565465765476166459475975476546254516416415414215465654651764+546516544664564/5!!!!!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    OOH! i did a little internal dance, just so i DIDN'T break a mirror....lol

    My feet are STANDING
    So close to the edge
    Avoiding many slips
    It's harder not to fall
    When a smile curls on your lips

    ^ i understand this...damn those amazing smiles.....

    great job jesse....

    i mean: I HATE IT, TERRIBLE! ^_^

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