OOH! i did a little internal dance, just so i DIDN'T break a mirror....lol

My feet are STANDING
So close to the edge
Avoiding many slips
It's harder not to fall
When a smile curls on your lips

^ i understand this...damn those amazing smiles.....

great job jesse....

i mean: I HATE IT, TERRIBLE! ^_^

AWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT IS SOOOOO ADORABLE!!!!!!!!! once again my favorite part was the ending! but the whole thing was just so...AWWWWW!!!!!! it's sooooo CUTE! i luv it sooo much!
xoxo
~!me!~

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English teachers should be proud
For this metaphor I use
I'm not falling off a cliff
I'm falling, in love, with you

Like most of your other poems, the last stanza is my favorite. I dont know if i ever told you this, but this is one poem that i never expected. Definately one of your best