Time goes on

by Brandon Lee   Mar 10, 2008


You can break the heart, You break the bones.
But all that heals as time goes on.
You can burn a bridge, You can burn a home.
But in the end You will know it's wrong.
You can choose love or hate it's all the same
It does not matter as they can both bring pain.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Ouch. The emotions in here were so strong and I could really feel what you were saying. The flow was great and nothing seemed forced. Well done, I enjoyed readin this. *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Darien

    Sad, but true. Love does hurt, a lot more than hate ever could. A short simple write. Nicely done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    A poem full of words of wisdom! I like it... very creative and well-thought out. 5/5 for sure. The structure was a little off, but it didn't stop it from being a great poem! good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Again, it's good but doesn't try adding the commas on every line. I liked a lot though. It's a very beautiful poem. Doesn't have as much feeling/ emotion in it, but it's still good. Good job!

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem. It is very true. It had a nice flow to it. I only wish that it was longer.

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