Comments : Paved my way

  • Great poem. It's absolutely amazing, since I know what friendship is all about. But, since this is a long poem, put it into stanzas so I could make it look better. It's greatly written. Good job!

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    I like to call this a "Poetic write" It tells more of a story than a normal poem, and its length doesn't follow the structure of a normal poem :P Very good write, emotional and deep... And the flow was really good! 5/5