Lost love

by Xx Grieving from the inside outxX   Mar 10, 2008


His lover body was laying over his lap while he tried frantically to will away all of the pain that was surely pulsating through her. he pulled her tightly against his crimson stained crap as through raced thought his mind suddenly he remember what she said "i love you forever."she whispered with one last haunting breath. i wish there was only one thing i could do different and maybe she still be here with me. in my arm's but she gone forever my lover my best friend she is no more no more awaking up next to her no more kisses no more tears no more laughing or her smile here one day gone the next. she was so full of life and love. i am going to really miss that what do i do now she gone. she went into the moon light one last time he fall to his knees as he wept over his beloved corpse his pain grows twice as strong and it was going to stay he left with beautiful star to light his way thought his would of darkness he say his goodbye for now. goodbye my love my angle i will see you again in heaver

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hiya Chris,
    I love the subject matter and the way its meaning courses through me. It could be structured and tweaked, but I enjoyed it the way it is, so 5/5

    Michael

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