Across
by Xx Grieving from the inside outxX Mar 10, 2008
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I watch the moon light dance across the beach the sand between my toes feels cold and warm all of the some time i wait for you to come back to me from the bottom of the ocean floor. wear are love never end ever night you come back to me ever night we lay together just before you leave me again my love i will never leave you in this world or the next our love is never ending. i weak in the morning just before you leave the sea calls you back and take me from my arm's again untill tomorrow my love i will see you again. |
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16 years ago
by KJ
Good write =)
Noticed that this one wasnt rated & commented so decided to be the first
Very good job on using imagery. Also, you had a specific voice. Great choice on vocabulary and your emotion was wonderful
Overall, beautifully written
5/5
