This is also really good! For only having two poems on here right now...you're amazing. I've got lot's and most of them aren't very good :P. You remind me of Walt Whitman a tad...and he's one of my favorites! So, this is good, but more grammatical things-the very last line doesn't make sense to me. Sometimes P&Q's freaks out and takes liberties with the punctuation-so you should fix all that confusing stuff up top. In the first line of the last stanza, there should be punctuation between 'I like you' and the rest, just cause it will make it easier to read.
Anyway, you totally rock out, and I look forward to reading your next poems...I think I might add you to favorites! :P

Rock on!

Toni!