Went to jail today...

by David Ensor   Mar 10, 2008


Went to jail today
felt content in every way
shame was left ashamed of me
but all the shame i cannot see
is there something wrong with that
is there something wrong with me
should i learn to hate these things
is it hate that true joy brings
hate myself to find myself
sounds like wasting time myself
cuz aren't we really all the same
stupid people full of shame

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  • 16 years ago

    by putting the pieces back together

    This one was great
    first one i've read of yours
    trust me i'm gonna see what else you got!

    cuz aren't we really all the same
    stupid people full of shame

    i really liked that part
    i thought it brought it all together nicely and brought out it's meaning well

  • 16 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Wow..there is something about this poem which makes it really unique and I have to say I really liked reading it... the flow is amazing and really carries you thru the entire poem... I love the way it was written.. and the meaning behind it is really interesting..

    hate myself to find myself
    sounds like wasting time myself

    Very very nicely written.. amazing poem in my opinion. great job! Thanks for all the comments on my poems =) I'm glad you liked them. 5/5 from me.

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