I could ramble on about poetic devices, but in all honesty poetry isn't about that. Its about being honest and translating the feelings you have or want to get out.

You did a terrific job and I feel you aren't a bullshit poet. There's a lot who are and who just write but they don't get it. I think you do. The girl you love is extremely lucky.

Thnx i appreciate it. and sadly im single. things like that kinda puts me to my writing mode. but ne way, thnx again for ur comment. :]