by Cheezy954 Mar 11, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I hurt somtimes,because i gave you my heart; and in return,you crushed my soul. I gave you 150% of my time,but I could never have 5 min. of yours. I made time to come see you;but you only seemed to kick kme to the curve. You said you loved me, but yet you cheated on me. You said i dont understand; but trully, i know only to well;that nothing to me now,but a peice of s**t. |
by Jessie
Not to bad, a lot of emotion. I think it could be really good if you played around with it a bit more, maybe gave it some form. also "kick kme to the curve" There's a small typo in there and correct me if I'm wrong but I think it's curb not curve |
I feel your pain, So many girls get heart broken over and over. You need to step back and tell your self you deserve better. |
by Cheezy954
Thanx |
Nice.. Like it, keep up ^_^ |