Nice.. Like it, keep up ^_^

Thanx

I feel your pain, So many girls get heart broken over and over. You need to step back and tell your self you deserve better.

Not to bad, a lot of emotion. I think it could be really good if you played around with it a bit more, maybe gave it some form. also "kick kme to the curve" There's a small typo in there and correct me if I'm wrong but I think it's curb not curve

Jessie