Good poem, i hope things got better now

Wow your very good at creating a nice and easy to read flow....
I like how every second line rhymes...

But really you just need the 2nd and 4th sentence to rhyme.......... And then you can go crazy and use weird words in the first and 3rd lines.......

I like!!!

5/5

Man this must happen to about every couple
in the world kind of reminded me of the band
<staind> song <everything changes>
read the lyrics if you get a chance 5/5
on this excellent poem cy