The Last Rose

Nicely written, and very deep. It had a powerful meaning behind it. Thank you for sharing.

It's really good...and i can see that there is a deeper meaning to it...it's not just about a flower..it's about our life...

It was very pretty. One thing though....stanza-two spaces-stanza-two spaces-stanza-one space. I just thought I'd mention it. It caught my attention. Okay, anyways...It was a very pretty poem that uses that classic phrase, every rose has a thorn. It was great. Five.

Wow... wow... wow
It made me feel all tingly inside, great poem

First I must say upon reading this a warm feeling of peace and tranquility could be felt running through my veins ....

The Spirit of love has so much power
That stems from the root to the flower
Preserve the vine and the fruit grows
Like the beauty of life and the last rose
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You have woven a web of beauty here ... and I can't help but get caught in the magical feeling this stanza set off. Breath taking!

He came into our lives like a prayer
With the promise he could take us there
With the hope of what lies above
I believe in the great power of love
^^^
This stanza makes me want to reach out and hug someone .... I hope the words of this masterpiece spread through-out the world ... Beautifully penned!

Luanne