Loved it, very simple, elegant but with a strong message, Great write and keep it up. |
I really enjoyed in this piece. It is worded nicely and it holds an amount of greatly expressed emotions that I can relate to. You are able to portray very heartfelt feelings within short poems and this piece is not an exception. I admire the simplicity and inner beauty of this poem. |
by Conrad
Simple, but in a good way. This had a message to tell, and you did it nicely. Everyone is flawed, its learning to deal, that is the real thing to get over. |