by Liisa Carberry Mar 11, 2008
category :
Life, society /
other
Shadows play beneath the full gold moon, |
by H E Losey
I think it is a great stroy that you have told and would enjoy seeing it again after you spent some time smoothing and carressing some of the lines for rhyme and rythm. You have a fertile mind that needs to be put to paper for all to enjoy. |
by Baby Rainbow
I really liek that poem, you write very well xx |