Omfg this is sooo good...i love it u should comment mine if you want.

This is full of agony, full of dispair, full of the spark of every dream and full of each dream of happiness lost. Forever lost, forever gone, forever love - gone, so long!

I feel your pain only too well. I too am licking wounds. Keep hope in your heart, because love will find you!!

Well done

Michael

This was so touching, and full of emotion
such a great flow, leaving the reader having to finish n_n
5/5

Wow, that's deep. I'm sorry for your hurt and agony. Hope it gets better soon.

About your poem, it was very well "organized?" how should I say it... very well penned. Readers can feel what your feeling, and you've also chosen nice words. Great job!

I love it. It's a great discription of the love that is fueled by lust. It's a great feeling but deep inside we know that without the lust this love would fail. Yet it feels so real. We hesitate but know that it's not destined for more. 5/5

Such an emotional write...amazing job 5/5

Wow, I can totally relate! I just went through the same thing of two years...and I was thinking a lot of the same things! Nice work!!! :)