WOW... that was.. PERFECT.
I loved the whole flow of the poem, each word, and every stanza just seemed to roll right off the tongue, in a very beautiful way.
Very good metaphors used.
Definately a favorite!
=)
5/5

Ooo, I'm quite fond of this one. A job well done. The metaphors were quite unique along with the title itself. A five from me.

Wow, Teria. You've never let me down on a good poem.
I've been reading poems for like twenty minutes, and I started to think I lost my love for poetry. But really, it just because some people can't write it well.
(Wow, that sounds so mean, but I really don't mean it in a bad way.. you know?)

But anyways.
Yeah, I think I prefer prose or at least longer lines, but I really enjoyed reading yours. Perhaps it could use a little more emotion/description, but who am I to complain?

All in all, it was beautifully written and I do believe you to be one of the top writers on the site.
Too bad we don't get recognized as such.
ily.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5