Now this piece I really liked, but I only voted it a 4/5 because I only give out 5s to the utmost pieces, and so very rarely give them out.

Anyway, the flow was great, as were the rhymes. This piece felt very much alive, and it felt like it came from you, effortlessly, which is what I think I liked about this piece so much. I think its usually a great element in a poem, when it seems like the words have just flowed from the writer, though a lot of thought has probably been involved.

Brad