This is so sweet and genuine, jesse...

Then speed up
When I see you smile
All logic is gone
I'm counting the seconds in a mile

^ i know how this feels...^_^
this is a great poem...i like your happy, in love poems more than your doom and gloom poems. i'm not gonna be on tonight, i'm sick. but i'll talk to you tomorrow!!!

Aww! i always luv ur endings! and u have a great way of keeping the reader hooked and wanting more! luv it! 5/5!!
xoxo
~me!~

Inspired by love, and for love i suppose. its another love poem out of perhaps millions, but the difference being that you had put just as much heart into this as you did mind. you kept it quite simple, but it was laced with the complexity of love, which is something not everybody understands. with such poets as yourself, gracing the world with the letters and words in the order that you do, we should all be considered lucky. some of us would take your works and use them for our own selfish acts, others would seek to admire. I, for one, choose much to admire. i would feel guilty taking such a piece of art and taking the credit for it. thanks for putting something incredible into existence.

Gorgeous. beautiful. wow. amazing. unbelievable. stunning. i don't think u know how much i loved this one. ahhhhh. ur such a good writer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hun, you're featured!!

Too much thought put into the rhyme

This poem was amazing.
I loved its simple complexity.
It was great how you captured the essence of love
Good job!
I thought it was awesome!! =)

I really like this poem!! made me start thinking quite a bit lol, given me some inspiration aswell.
i rate it 5/5 x

That was super ill. Super creative too and the flow and rhyme made it even better.5/5.

I love this poem its amazing. 5/5
-Kay

Ok, i think ALL of your poems are my favorite.
I love rereading them, they bring back so many amazing memories of walking to my locker and reading them on a little white piece of paper...