This was a very sad, blood drenched poem. Sadly, I am one of the many people that can relate to it... in so many different ways. Short, but bittersweet. This should be in the sad and depression category though, not love. Even so, still amazing. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

Really good. I freaked out when i read it.
one suggestion though. I think you should put in the sadness and depression categoriy. but that's just me.