by Love vs Fate
Brovo!! i must say such a emotional poem...i can feel the scaredness you were feeling in the poem..about the boyfriend finding out. wow i give you a 10/10! excellent way of words chosen! |
Nice job on this poem i loved it.=) |
Wow, great poem! I love, love, love your title! Keep up the great work! |
by Jaymes Haze
I loved this. |
Beautiful work - the legnth of the single stanza really draws the reader into the text. If it were any longer (or any shorter, for that matter) I don't think it would be quite so powerful. |