Comments : At Loss For Breath

  • 16 years ago

    by lost and incomplete

    Wow nice poem sorry if its true but very good pm me if u wanna talk

  • 16 years ago

    by kylexthexmagnificent

    Omg...this poem was sooo good but very sad...i honestly teared up reading it...great job Kortney.

  • 16 years ago

    by AndreaDanielle

    Good poem its was sad though...is this real? im so sorry if it is...if ever you need someone you know im always here...

  • 16 years ago

    by LoveKeepsMeStrong

    Very powerful poem. it is great in an extremly sad way =(
    i hope it isn't real =/
    ur a great writer
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    OMG! I hope this didn't really happen. If it did. I'm so sorry. Dang it's sad to see this happen to someone. Even if you don't know them. Awesome poem.
    -vino

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats an awfukl thing to go through, well done for writing it out xxxxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Leah

    Wow, that was a very dark poem to write, if its true, you can IM me if you want...very good for writing it out tho!
    xxoo leah

  • 16 years ago

    by Ethan

    Did this reaally happen if it Did im so sorry a guy should never do that expecaly if they are older what am i saying they never shoud PERIOD

  • 16 years ago

    by CWG

    I am happy to know this didn't happen to you, but it was a very emotional well written poem. GREAT JOB! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael

    Wow this is deep, i hope this never happened, a girl could never ever deserve that...good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by nadege isidor

    Wow that was a good poem but im sorry if it really happened if it did just keep your head to the sky and try to forget

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelvin Masi

    Awwww what a great poem. Ilove it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Blue

    Wow, speechless, life's very crazy.. I'm sorry if that happen =/

  • 16 years ago

    by Jaymes Haze

    Wow...
    You were left breathless, and I was left speechless.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cainer

    It was very sad. But very good at the same time!

  • 16 years ago

    by Asher

    A story of BAM!!! an amezing poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Simply Trying

    This was very sad.... great job, i wish i was as good as you.

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew Santarita

    Say kortney you are the shit! no i mean this poem was relly good.
    i wish that i could write like this but i can't. hopefully oneday i will though

  • 16 years ago

    by Amir Riveroll

    Great job... makes me feel like im right there.

  • 16 years ago

    by IML

    I like this poem the most.
    very very very well written
    and more than just words
    but its the real thing.
    thanks for the comment. :)