Comments : At Loss For Breath

  • 16 years ago

    by Yeka

    I love this poem it speaks out in the heart and to admit the truth (^_^)

  • 16 years ago

    by GuRlZ JuZ WaNa HvE FuN

    Diz is a d poem wat a coincidence da sme fing hppnd 2 me but it wz 2 tngnz hu dun it they ruined my life

  • 16 years ago

    by Tylor Dent

    Im glad it was just a dream..i hope u never have to go thro that and if someone messes wit u like that let me kno and ill come up there and fuk there world up.. great poem loved it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    Wow this was a very deep poem, but powerful too. and you say it was a dream? well, that's good to hear. although i'm sry you had to dream such a thing. but all and all this was a great piece of writing keep up the nice work. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 16 years ago

    by Marcus blake

    Amazing i felt it in anyway 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by TiffanyTrippout

    ...She said it was just a dream..

    Amazing poem, by the way. Such emotion.

  • 15 years ago

    by brokenturtle

    Out of all of them, this ones my favorite. Incredible!

  • 15 years ago

    by Rodney Kirby

    Very good, and strong im sorry