I really like this , the feeling flowed smoothly .. pretty straight forward and a touching piece,indeed.
the first few lines got me hooked. its really relatable , im sure.
Great Work.

~Wake~

I really like that peom....
it makes sense.....
and very well written..

so i guess what im trying to say is that....

GREAT JOB!

I really like that peom....
it makes sense.....
and very well written..

so i guess what im trying to say is that....

GREAT JOB!