Control the metal, control your life.

by she   Mar 11, 2008


Slide the blade across your skin,
let relief flow Right in.
shh, don't tell, let this be your secrete sin
control the metal control your life,
careful, now not to deep with that knife,
hah, funny how you thought you could leave me behind,
you put me away, saying "never again"
night comes, then the sun, next, again, the blade has won.

[still working on]

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  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Leave it as it is hun, its fine. i like the ending the way it is xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Oh wow hun. i'm just gonna say, this will never save you from the pain. cutting can never help you. only god can. so i hope you can open your eyes and see that.....

    great poem though.