Wow. it amazes me how you manage to say so much with such simple words. you truly are a great writer even if its not exactly traditional. your writing speaks to me so much
good job and great poem 5/5 =D
btw thanks for commenting so much of my writing. i really appreciate it

Are you really the owner of this peice?!! wow wooow and woooooow. this peice incredible, awesome, beautiful, deep and so touching. full of emoitions too. you surprised me..no, you shocked me indeed. at first i wanted to close the page because it was too long but i said "let's give it a try" and once i start reading ...omg, you should know the rest hehe