Comments : Winter

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    It was okay. I'm very proud of you that I didn't find ANY spelling errors or capitalization mistakes or anything along those lines. It disgusts me how many poems I read on here that have those mistakes. It takes away from the poem and I usually skip to another one because it's too chopped up to read. Far too distracting. I thought your poem could use a little more zest. That's just me though. I also wasn't fond with the rhyming scheme. I prefer perfect rhymes. It's not that it was a bad poem it just didn't grab my attention. In season poems people have already experienced that season. Felt those things, thought those things, and I'm sure in school, wrote those things. I want to see something different, new, exciting. Sorry that I wasn't fond of it. That's just me though. From your rating I can clearly see that others saw what you wanted them to see. Three.

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Very beautiful poem! I love snow :) It's really well written and very descriptive. It painted a beautiful image in my mind. 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    Once again, you've done an amazing job. There is so much imagery in this poem. I could see it almost perfectly. (:

    There was one thing, though. It was probably just the way I was reading it and so on, but the 'transition' from the first to the second stanza kind of through me off, like when I read them together. And, I did so two times, and both times it kind of threw me off. I'm sure it was just me, but I figured I'd say something.
    The lines there though, are probably my favorite. They just didn't flow together all that well.

    This is an amazing poem, and the imagery in it makes it even better. Plus, you have good flow and word choices. (:

    Keep it up!

  • Freaking Awesome Poem. You really should become a great poet and you have a lot of talent. Copyright that and bottle it up! Joking. cuz then i could never read it

  • 16 years ago

    by Mischaela

    This is a beautiful poem. In fact all of your poems are woderful. You are such a good writer!! Keep up the good work.Look foward to more!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    The imagery here just blew me away and I was lost within your beautiful words. You touched every sense and put me into such a scenic place filled with beauty. The words you used to painted such flawless imagery was great and completed the poem to and made it stand out. The flow was great and overall it was a great nature poem. Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Interesting and well done thank you.