Oh Cy, thats a really good poem but so sad. I hope things get better for you I really do. You will be in my prayers tonight. 5/5

The game the game where you never
win but still play able i remmeber it well
another excellent piece

My comment for someone else's poem
daaaaaaaaaaa

The best "medicine" may be jst to cry,
addiction kinda seems like best medicine jst to write...keep writing..you painted a very real story. chin up. peace

Still a great poem. 5/5

Wow. very strong poem really touched my heart. just one question what is cy ?

Me thats is my name cy this was the conversation my wife and i had just befor
i stop using drugs i just turn into a poem
i got the ideal from a blink 182 song
the song was about a conversation where
this girl was kicking her boyfriend out cause
thier life was going nowhere I think it goes like this : < yOUR JUST A f**k up you're going nowhere your such a loser all our friends have left us and on and on lol they actually made a song out iof the words
that his girlfriends b**ching crazy huh

Nice work mate, completely portrays your hurt and pain, im glad your in a happier place, she deserves that and so do you....drugs are evil pure evil...you will never win with them......good work....

Very well written! i understand what you go through when someone you love is struggling with addiction. 5/5

"And words can't replace
the life you waste"
this poem is so amazing, it really made me feel, the line i quoted ^^^ gave me goosebumps man, because u are so right.

5/5 really nice job.

It's another way of putting perfection in a poem !! you did it again CY!

I agree i would never do any of that shit i l;ove life but it seems that the only way i can write is if i go deep down into that type of poems

I know exactly what its like
because drugs are a losing war
but yet they make you feel invincible
and make you believe that
you can lose the war but win the battle
but in the end
you simply lose everything
and when you hit rock bottom is when you
realize that it was all a facade.
The feelings you feel when you are high
are all so false
and have no value or meaning.
The repeated apologies
mean nothing because you just cant find it in
yourself to actually mean what they say
because you become so lost in your addiction.
I thought that this was a great poem
and it really portrayed
so much meaning which is a huge step forward,
to start realizing things in life.
I mean you've shown how
you acknowledge your wife and what she
goes through due to your addiction
(even though that isn't even a quarter of what actually happens, theres way more)
and I think that if you keep writing about it
and in each poem just go deeper into what addiction has done to your life and the pain it has caused you and those around you I think it could really help you.
Because I understand that when
you are in that state you just don't have a grasp on all the good things that you have in life because you are to busy focusing on the negatives!!
Your words are always amazing and are truly haunting as they bring back memories from
my not so distant past.
I've been clean for about a year now
and every day is a new fight but the thing about being clean is that I can show the world the real me,
its no longer a facade or a lie....
Now that I'm clean I'm living my own life... I"m understanding my feelings
and hope that you can find the same peace of mind as what I have!!
I understand what its like to battle an addiction and how you feel so alone but the thing is you aren't so if you ever just wanna talk the you're welcome to PM me anytime!!
This was truly an outstanding, deep and very emotional piece!!
Great Job!!