WOW, this should be in ur featured, im not kidding. 6/5

This was very good, u r a very talented girl

goo gurl!

Omg, i love this. the images in my heaad were intense and i loved the way you worded it all. one of the most enjoyable to me.

Omg im srry about the dream u have me babe..great poem but damn im sry

A funeral procession
moving to a beat
until the reach the top
death clawing at them, head to feet

the last line i didnt like so much it,

but other than that amazing poem i loved it, great haha the first stanza actually made me have to stand and change my sitting position cause i didnt know what i was in for with that kinda starting stanza, it caught my eye amazing