by Jen
Nice job :P |
by Confessions
It's amazing..:D keep writing |
True true... |
by Amy
Every parent in the world who has a child should read this. I think that a lot of the time parents tend to fall into an 'Atticus Finch' sort of parenting, going through the motions of taking care and providing for their kids but somehow along the way all emotional attachment is lost. |
by Miss Megan
I really enjoyed reading this poem. |
This poem is so well done and precise...I certainly cannot take issue with anything in the raw honesty you have delivered here.....my sincere sympathy is with you...And my praise for your capacity to release this frustration so creatively is also with you...'-) |
by minh
Very well said :] 5\5 although i never brought anything to my parents yet. |
by Dave
I love this poem and the way you put it together with dialog mixed in = ) |
Wow...that poem is AMAZING! I really like it, the flow the words the emotion, all of it. it was all good. I really really really like it. |
by Sanath Kumar
I guess that was the best combination of such simple words and feelings that I have come across for a long time. Hats off to this creation! I think all parents need to read this poem at least once in a life time! Please keep writing & God bless you! |
by Gizmo
Even though i commented and i entered it, i never actually had time to |
by Jess
Wonderful poem. People who are like that should not be parents. Parents need to understand the world that their children live in. We go through alot and sometimes we just need parents (most of the time the people we can only trust) to put us back on track. I believe parents should read this poem and realize just what kids go through. Parents have alot on them to but both the parents and the children need to help each other. But good poem. I love it! This is going to one of my favorites. Keep up the good work. 5/5 |
I absolutely am in love with it :] |
Wow. that is really well written and meaningful |
by shantavia
This is a wonderful poem and i feel u though parents just dont under and i dont think they will ever understand unless they where in are place then they would know whats up but other then that they just would be clueless about us teens 10/10 |
by aly
Soo true great job |
Again another amazingly written poem! This poem I love personally as I can relate as im sure so can many others! This poem was brilliant! Your choice of words, th flow of the poem was outstanding! |
by lillie
:) |
by Sarah
That is just crazy how good that is! It made me cry because of how right you are! Amazing poem 5/5 |
Parents dont usually understand until it is becomes very serious....good job =) this is a poem i can relate too |