Cliche Crush

by FlawlesslyTarnished   Mar 12, 2008


She's head over heels, so cliche, like a movie.
Butterflies in her stomach, whenever he is seen.
His smile makes her flutter, and explode up inside.
Yet he is ignorant of her existence, and she feels so denied.

Her gloomy outlook of life has subsided to content.
She's actually smiling and happy - to an extent.
Her eyes glimmer and glisten, at the sight of his refinement.
Simply not knowing him, to her, is complete torment.

In the essence of his presence, her heart beats so fast.
Pounding against her chest, as he slowly walks past.
He makes her feel emotions, that she's never felt before.
Her emotions run wild, and he's the one they do this for.

Confusions taken over, for she's never felt so deep.
Yet it all feels so right, that she's taken this leap.
He can make her smile, the way no one else can.
He doesn't even know it, and he may never understand.

She anticipates the days, of the moment they shall meet.
-What she'll say and how they'll greet.
Her eager emotions concealed, of her feelings so lush.
As she steadily keep quiet, of her secret cliche crush.

*I think the first stanza was kind of. .off?

© 2008 WilTED.

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  • 16 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    "She's head over heels, so cliche, like a movie.
    Butterflies in her stomach, whenever he is seen.
    "

    I agree with you, but its not the first stanza, just the first 2 lines ^^^ apart from that the rest of the poem is great!
    you use great vocabulary, and i enjoy reading your work because i HOPE it will expand my knowledge of words too; i use alot of the same words in my poems lol

    great poem luv,
    xxxxxx

    5/5 for sure. (:

  • 16 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Hey, i just wrote a super great comment for this and it disappeared :o! well i'm going to end it in short, i enjoyed the first stanza after i re-read if, it went with the flow. and i totally love the way your really cool volcabulary forms natural imagery =]
    keep writing. your added to favz so i can keep track of your poems.
    thanks.
    take care x

  • 16 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Hey, you know, the first time i read the first stanza, it seemed off, but then i got into the flow of the poem and after reading your little comment at the end i went back to the first stanza and re-read it and sounded just find. i have to say i'm in love with your imagery-creating-volcabulary. you poems seemed flawless, and an ideal perfect picture of a girls feelings and emotions when she's fallen...
    truely a great write.
    keep it up. hope to read more from you soon.
    i'll add you to my favourites to keep track of future work. thanks.
    take care x

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    I really enjoyed it because it is perfectly my mood right now if you could have replaced all the hims with tanner then i wuld have thought that i had written this I loved it and the first stanza wasnt off to me. nice work

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Most times love hurts and this poem reflects that. The flow is great

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