Comments : When ever i think of love

  • 16 years ago

    by oNice

    **First to comment!! SWEET!**
    I don't want to be mean, BUT! I really think you should capitalize all your I's and if you make stanzas, it would look a lot more neat! The words are great, but I think you should make it a little more neat to be easier to read. Sorry you get upset, I didn't mean to be mean. When you make another one, PM k?
    -oNice