Rachel
What a beautiful poem of love. The imagery is wonderful. It paints a picture of that once in a lifetime love you feel for someone.

A gift that's so unique
No one could out do
My heart, my love, a promise......
Forever, from me to you

I love this stanza. I just relate to the words so much.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

Rachel,

Such a sweet and loving picture you have painted here. I enjoyed reading it very much.

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

A lifetime of devotion
A sparkle in the eye
A tender word to comfort
Whenever you should cry
^^^
Beautiful stanza! Spells love to me, for sure

A gift that's so unique
No one could out do
My heart, my love, a promise......
Forever, from me to you
^^^
I love this ending stanza ... you've dipped your pen in ink and created beautiful, colorful imagery with words of love.

A very enjoyable read Rachel!

Great commitment

Rachel,
As always you manage to capture the heart and soul of a pure undying love. Your poetry has always brought me such comfort. Such as with this piece, it encompasses the mind and brings happiness of the comfort felt from love. It is such a beautiful feeling.

A gift that's so unique
No one could out do
My heart, my love, a promise......
Forever, from me to you

What a superb ending to a beautiful poem...the hopeless romantic in me is grinning from ear to ear from this one! He's also learning a lot about improving his writing skills :)

I take it Heather didn't pen this to Paul?

Amazing poem! i loved it it was so sweet and heart felt 5/5 <33

Brillaint. This was a gentle, soft, loving piece. I loved it, it made me feel all calm and relaxed. I don't have a favorie stanza, I'm afraid, because it was all as good as each other, sorry. Good job, love.

Brad

Great poem. I really liked it. That is what i hope to have with my guy. It had a nice flow and I liked the word choice. 5.5

I agree with almost everyone here, very well written. I saw it from a mothers heart to her child. Like a picture we all see things differently. Peace

Rachel, a wonderful piece and clever too!
I loved the 3rd stanza, the 'confident comedian' had a nice ring to it, ironic too, as most comedians confess to being really shy off stage!

Well done on an excellent write 5/5

Michael

<3 Love it <3

Wish someone had said that to me...

"A gift that's so unique
No one could out do
My heart, my love, a promise......
Forever, from me to you"

Yup....that's love..